Sun Burns! - Revision history

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 == Plot ==
-The [[Simpsons family]] and other inhabitants of [[Springfield]] visit [[Springfield Public Beach]] when they arrive, they discover that [[Mr. Burns]] bought the beach. [[Nelson]] and [[Bart]] trying to have fun but discover that Burns dogs guarding the sea and he hired paintball snipers in the lifeguard tower. He has hired supermodels to make people feel bad about their looks. [[Lisa]] ask [[Mr. Burns]] to change his mind but he refuses. Mr. Burns starts sunbathing on the beach and will not have the sun block that [[Smithers]] offer him.
+The [[Simpson family]] and other people of [[Springfield]] visit the [[Springfield Public Beach]]. When they arrive, they discover that [[Mr. Burns]] bought the beach. [[Nelson]] and [[Bart]] try to have fun but find that Burns' dogs guard the sea and that he has hired paintball snipers in the lifeguard tower. He also hired supermodels to make people feel bad about their looks. [[Lisa]] asks [[Mr. Burns]] to change his mind, but he refuses. Mr. Burns starts sunbathing on the beach and does not use the sunblock that [[Smithers]] offers him.
-Burns starts to frieds in the sun and Smithers is prevented by the paintball snipers. Smithers gets upset and starts crying, Lisa and [[Grampa]] decides therefore to rescue him. They take a rowboat and row to shore and when they're near the beach throwing grandfather bacon to the dogs so that Lisa could swim to the beach. When she comes to the beach, she dazzles the paintball snipers with a mirror, she also with it models that will disterherade by check on himself. Lisa manages to rescue Burns and wrap him in aloe-coated bandages. Burns thanks Lisa and Grampa and promise that all will enter the beach for free. The family begins to enjoy the beach and Lisa are happy to Burns finally changed. Grampa says he did not and it turns out that Burns takes 20 dollars for people that wants leave the beach.
+Burns begins to fry in the sun, but the paintball snipers prevent Smithers from helping him. Smithers gets upset and starts crying, so Lisa and [[Grampa]] decide to rescue him. They take a rowboat and row to shore, and when they are near the beach, they throw bacon to the dogs so that Lisa can swim to the beach. When she reaches the beach, she dazzles the paintball snipers with a mirror, which also distracts the models who check on themselves. Lisa manages to rescue Burns and wraps him in aloe-coated bandages. Burns thanks Lisa and Grampa and promises that everyone will enter the beach for free. The family begins to enjoy the beach, and Lisa is happy that Burns has finally changed. Grampa says that he did not, and it turns out that Burns now charges $20 for people who want to leave the beach.
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-'''''Sun Burns!''''' is a ''[[The Simpsons Summer Shindig]]'' comic story first printed in {{TSSS|7}}.
+'''''Sun Burns!''''' is a ''[[The Simpsons Summer Shindig]]'' comic story first printed in {{TSSS|7|a=no}}.
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-[[Category:The Simpsons Summer Shindig stories]]
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 [[Category:Comic stories written by Ian Boothby]]

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-'''''Sun Burns!''''' is a ''[[The Simpsons Summer Shindig]]'' comic story featured in {{TSSS|7}}.
+'''''Sun Burns!''''' is a ''[[The Simpsons Summer Shindig]]'' comic story first printed in {{TSSS|7}}.
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 |title= Sun Burns!
 |image=[[File:Sun Burns!.png|250px]]
-|released= 29 May [[2013]]
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 |pages= 10
 |series= ''[[The Simpsons Summer Shindig]]''
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-'''''Sun Burns!''''' is a comic story featured in {{TSSS|7}}.
+'''''Sun Burns!''''' is a ''[[The Simpsons Summer Shindig]]'' comic story featured in {{TSSS|7}}.
 == Synopsis ==
 [[Mr. Burns]]' decision to commandeer [[Springfield]]'s public beach amidst a heatwave turns the citizens of Springfield against him.
-==Plot==
+== Plot ==
 The [[Simpsons family]] and other inhabitants of [[Springfield]] visit [[Springfield Public Beach]] when they arrive, they discover that [[Mr. Burns]] bought the beach. [[Nelson]] and [[Bart]] trying to have fun but discover that Burns dogs guarding the sea and he hired paintball snipers in the lifeguard tower. He has hired supermodels to make people feel bad about their looks. [[Lisa]] ask [[Mr. Burns]] to change his mind but he refuses. Mr. Burns starts sunbathing on the beach and will not have the sun block that [[Smithers]] offer him.
 Burns starts to frieds in the sun and Smithers is prevented by the paintball snipers. Smithers gets upset and starts crying, Lisa and [[Grampa]] decides therefore to rescue him. They take a rowboat and row to shore and when they're near the beach throwing grandfather bacon to the dogs so that Lisa could swim to the beach. When she comes to the beach, she dazzles the paintball snipers with a mirror, she also with it models that will disterherade by check on himself. Lisa manages to rescue Burns and wrap him in aloe-coated bandages. Burns thanks Lisa and Grampa and promise that all will enter the beach for free. The family begins to enjoy the beach and Lisa are happy to Burns finally changed. Grampa says he did not and it turns out that Burns takes 20 dollars for people that wants leave the beach.
 [[Category:The Simpsons Summer Shindig stories]]